Veni vidi Vidding!

I came, I saw, I...waited until nearly the last minute to get going on my Festivids entry. *sigh* I've been going nearly nonstop on this thing for the last two weeks, and I think I'm close to done.

I have a rough cut that I would desperately love for someone to take a look at. Subject knowledge not necessary - I'm mainly looking for a second pair of eyes to tell me if it's presentable.

Any betas, please?